[From Dag Forssell (2015.09.09.1350 PDT)]
Ten days ago I asked for critique of a new paper.
Fred and Rick said they like it, but then I received the kind of comments I was hoping for in a private mail from Lloyd. That made me reconsider text. I also found ways to make the graphics more legible.
Several iterations later, I think this is as good as I can make it.
The new version is attached.
If anyone can see anything wrong or that might be better stated (no increase in length, please) speak now or forever hold your peace. I am about to add this to the Book of Readings, which I will work on next. I have not yet added the Harvard case histories to www.pctresources.com. When I do, I will of course reference archive.com. I have written them to ask if it is OK to mirror their files. I think this work is in the public domain, and my files will be half size, 15 MB instead of 30.
The older version is still posted here–in case you want to see changes.
http://www.livingcontrolsystems.com/intro_papers/domain_pct.pdf
Best, Dag
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