Typos: Book of Readings

[Dag Forssell (2017.08.16.18:50 PDT)]

I am setting out to introduce PCT to service clubs and management groups.

Now practicing a 20 minute talk with a half dozen slides.

My target market is engineers with an interest in management, so I will
highlight Jim Soldani’s papers in my talk. The two papers are included in
the book of readings.

I have just noted that the “before” image is the same as the
“after” image, so I have corrected the online version
[
http://www.livingcontrolsystems.com/download/pct_readings_ebook_2016.pdf

](http://www.livingcontrolsystems.com/download/pct_readings_ebook_2016.pdf) and will not correct the printed version. That will cost me $40
and remove the printed book’s availability for a week or so. No big
deal.

While I do that correction, I have an opportunity to correct any other
typos.

Has anyone noted anything that is wrong/awkward and should be
corrected? A link? A typo? A clarification?

This applies to the May 2016 edition. There may well be a new Summer 2018
edition, but that will be a later effort.

Best, Dag

Resend: I wrote "will not" should be "will now"

[Dag Forssell (2017.08.16.18:50 PDT)]

I am setting out to introduce PCT to service clubs and management groups.
Now practicing a 20 minute talk with a half dozen slides.

My target market is engineers with an interest in management, so I will highlight Jim Soldani's papers in my talk. The two papers are included in the book of readings.

I have just noted that the "before" image is the same as the "after" image, so I have corrected the online version http://www.livingcontrolsystems.com/download/pct_readings_ebook_2016.pdf
  and will now correct the printed version. That will cost me $40 and remove the printed book's availability for a week or so. No big deal.

While I do that correction, I have an opportunity to correct any other typos.
Has anyone noted anything that is wrong/awkward and should be corrected? A link? A typo? A clarification?

This applies to the May 2016 edition. There may well be a new Summer 2018 edition, but that will be a later effort.

Best, Dag